Date: October 27, 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this! Great Fic!
Date: July 15, 2012 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well, quite vivid. Very well done.
I'll have to check out your other stuff!
Thanks! I hadn't seen anything that had to do soley on her change so I was inspired. It was just going to be left at that but then I ended up writing "I'm Still Holding On" partially inspired by this story.
Date: January 22, 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent, and surprisingly my first foray into a story told entirely around Bella’s turning.
You actually did really well with the way you structured the entire story into a one-shot, managing to seamlessly cram months into mere moments, without making me feel like I was missing something. It’s definitely proof that you don’t need to endlessly continue a story that can truly be summed up better in a single chapter. I can count on one hand the authors I have read that have the ability to do that.
I enjoy how it managed, in some ways, to be from both of their points of views, with Bella hearing it and Jasper telling it. And how, like in your story ISHO, you make Bella so accepting of the human- blood drinking lifestyle. Despite being so OOC for the Twilight verse, because drinking animals is what makes the Cullen’s different, I’ve always preferred it the other way. If seeing the two words Vegetarian and Vampire isn’t enough to send you into hysterics, I don’t know what is.
In the end, I find it hard to call this simply a one-shot. To me it’s a story. It just happened to only take one chapter to tell it.
Thanks hun I am happy you enjoyed the OS. It became the inspiration for my current multi-chapter fic. I really appreciate the R&R and the kind words! XOXO sushi
Thanks hun I am happy you enjoyed the OS. It became the inspiration for my current multi-chapter fic.
I really appreciate the R&R and the kind words!